143. (Marina Tsvetaeva)

And, in part, 143. (Elaine Feinstein), since it is Feinstein’s translations (written with the assistance of Angela Livingstone) from the Russian on which I will be relying. Although Livingstone tells us that Tsvetaeva’s voice is “particularly difficult to capture,” Tsvetaeva took a view of poetry that might empower a translator, though it also places a burden of the highest creative expectations on the act of translation. In a letter to Rilke, from July 1926, she argues that Goethe (a hero of hers) was wrong to say that nothing significant in poetry could be achieved in a foreign language: “Writing poetry is in itself translating, from the mother tongue into another, whether French or German should make no difference. No language is the mother tongue. Writing poetry is rewriting it.” From which it might follow that translating poetry entails rewriting the mother tongue of the translation.

Feinstein at least brings something alive into English–and, I think, also something that is alive unlike other English poems (and so, by Tsvetaeva’s standards, a success).  Here, the tenth part from the sequence, Poem of the End:

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Closely, like one creature, we

start: there is our cafe!

.

There is our island, our shrine, where

in the morning, we people of the

.

rabble, a couple for a minute only,

conducted a morning service:

.

with things from country markets, sour

things seen through sleep or          spring.

The coffee was nasty there

entirely made from oats (and

.

with oats you can extinguish

caprice in fine race-horses).

There was no smell of Araby.

Arcadia was in

.

that coffee.

.

But how she smiled at us

and sat us down by her,

sad and worldly in her wisdom

a grey-haired paramour.

.

Her smile was solicitous

(saying: you’ll wither! live!),

it was a smile at madness and being

penniless, at yawns          and love

.

and–this was the chief thing–

at laughter         without reason

smiles          with no deliberation

and our faces          without wrinkles.

.

Most of all       at youth

at passions          out of this climate

blown in from some other place

flowing from some other source

.

into that dim cafe

(burnous and Tunis) where

she smiled at hope and flesh

under old-fashioned clothes.

.

(My dear friend          I don’t complain

It’s just another scar.)

To think how she saw us off,

that proprietress in her cap

.

stuff         as a Dutch hat…

.

Not quite remembering, not quite

understanding, we are led away from the festival—

along our street!          no longer ours          that

we walked many times, and no more shall.

.

Tomorrow the sun will rise in the West.

And then David will break with Jehovah.

–What are we doing?–We are separating.

–That’s a word that means nothing to me.

.

It’s the most inhumanly senseless

of words: sep          rating. (Am I one of a hundred?)

It is simply a word of four syllables and

behind their sound lies: emptiness.

.

Wait! Is it even correct in Serbian or

Croatian? Is it a Czech whim, this word.

Sep          aration!  To sep         arate!

It is insane          unnatural

.

a sound to burst the eardrums, and spread out

far beyond the limits of longing itself.

Separation–the word is not in the Russian

language. Or the language of women. Or men.

.

Nor in the language of God. What are we–sheep?

To stare about us as we eat.

Separation–in what language is it,

when the meaning itself doesn’t exist?

.

or even the sound!–well an empty one, like

the noise of  a saw in your sleep perhaps.

Separation. That belongs to the school of

Khlebnikov’s         nightingale-groaning

.

swan-like…

so how does it happen?

Like a lake of water running dry.

Into air. I can feel our hands touching

To separate. Is a shock of thunder

.

upon my head–oceans rushing into

a wooden house. This is Oceania’s

further promontory. And the streets are steep.

To separate. That means to go downward

.

downhill          the sighting sound of two

heavy soles             and at last a hand receives

the nail in it. A logic that turns

everything over. To separate

.

means we have to become

single creatures          again

.

we who had grown into one.

.

Here, for a change (a change, that is, for those who have read a lot about the poetry of the 20th century) is a poem that neither seeks to alienate language, and make it strange, nor that speaks to the inadequacy of language; it is instead a poem that confronts the language that matters most as already alien to and alienating experience; and the poem, rather than end there, seeks to arrest the alienation, to work against it, and bring it into alignment with an experience of alienation. The word “separate,” she says is not in the mother tongue, and so she rewrites the tongue to speak of her experience of separation; she wants to close the gap between herself and the word, between herself and the experience, and also, as we read through the poem’s fragments of memory, between herself and the places from which she and that other, the addressee from whom she is separated, have drifted, been cleaved. The work of collecting, bringing near, making stable and immediate, her tactile and felt experiences of life, and her language also, is in service of better apprehending the exile and distance she feels from there.

In “Footnote to a Poem” (a lengthy essay on Tsvetaeva), Joseph Brodsky writes with admiration:

Tsvetaeva’s voice had the sound of something unfamiliar and frightening to the Russian ear: the unacceptability of the world. It was not the reaction of a revolutionary or a progressive demanding changes for the better, nor was it the conservatism or snobbery of an aristocrat who remembers better days. On the level of content, it was a question of the tragedy of existence in general, par excellence, outside a temporal context. On the plane of sound, it was a matter of the voice striving in the only direction possible for it: upward. A striving similar to that of the soul toward its source. In the poet’s own words, “gravitation from/ the earth, above the earth, away from/ both the worm and the grain.” To this should be added: from one’s own self, from one’s own throat…But while acknowledging that this rejection of the world by the voice is indeed a leitmotif of Tsvetaeva’s work, it must be noted that her diction was completed devoid of any “etherealness.” On the contrary: Tsvetaeva was a poet very much of this world, concrete, surpassing the Acmeists in precision of details, and in aphoristic and sarcasm surpassing everybody. more like that of a bird than an angel, her voice always knew above what it was elevated, knew what was there, down below (or,more precisely, what–there below–was lacking).

Brodsky has all of the advantages as a reader of Tsvetaeva, reading her with immense familiarity, admiration, and care for the Russian; but what he says here seems to take hold of the wrong end of the stick. Finding that her voice is in some way removed from the world, he sees it as aspiring for further, more complete, liberation or escape. Agreeing that the self of her poetry is often nearly dissolved, often untethered from place or displaced from location, ranging above a field of details, I find instead that her poetry aspires to establish, summon, and ground itself in a particular present and a particular spot in the world; but that doing so means, as she feels she must rewrite her language, rewriting immediacy, rather than assuming it.

Here is “Homesickness” (1934; she was living, an emigre, in Paris):

.

Homesickness! that long

exposed weariness!

It’s all the same to me now

where I am           altogether lonely

.

or what stones I wander over

home with a shopping bag to

a house that is no more mine

than a hospital or a barracks.

.

It’s all the same to me, captive

lion         what faces I move through

bristling, or what human crowd will

cast me out         as it must

.

into myself, into my separate internal

world, a Kamchatka bear without ice.

Where I fail to fit in (and I’m not trying) or

where I’m humiliated          it’s all the same.

.

And I won’t be seduced by the thought of

my native language, its milky call.

How can it matter          in what tongue I

am misunderstood by whoever I meet

.

(or by what readers, swallowing

newspring, squeezing for gossip?)

They all belong to the twentieth

century, and      I am before time

.

stunned, like a long left

behind from an avenue of trees.

People are all the same to me, everything

is the same, and it may be the most

.

indifferent of all          are these

signs and tokens which once were

native         but the dates have been

rubbed out:          the soul was born somewhere.

.

For my country has taken so little care

of me that even the sharpest spy could

go over my whole spirit and would

detect no native stain there.

.

Houses are alien, churches are empty

everything         is the same:

But if by the side of the path one

particular bush rises

the rowanberry…

.

Her poems summon, stumble into, lose hold of, but reach out for, an immediate context of the world’s space and time, from which bearing towards another, the addressee of the poem, absent, distant, or towards another place, the remembered home, the point of departure, the lost shelter, are possible.  She is a poet of perpetual exile, from the past and across the present, but she does not write as much about what it is like to be apart from others as she writes in order to ground herself, to contain her voice, and to amass sufficient sense of self so that the longing of exile can have orientation and so that the disorientation of exile can have a center without which disorientation cannot be felt. She is a lyric poet seeking the force of gravity that Brodsky sees her as wanting to escape.

A poem that not only looks earthward, but clings to an anchorage on earth, here is the seventh section of Wires (1923):

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Patiently, as tarmac under hammers,

patiently, as what is new matures,

patiently, as death must be awaited,

patiently, as vengeance may be nursed—

.

So I shall wait for you. (One look down to earth.

Cobblestones. Lips between teeth. And numb.)

Patiently, as sloth can be prolonged,

patiently, as someone threading beads.

.

Toboggans squeak outside; the door answers.

Now the wind’s roar is inside the forest.

What has arrived is writing, whose corrections

are lofty as a change of reign, or a prince’s entrance.

.

And let’s go home!

this is inhuman–

Yet it’s mine.

.

In the second to last line “this” points towards a horizon, or is it a corner? vast or confined? it both sets something before us and the poet and declines to illuminate the shadow; it is exclusionary and inviting at once; it orients us towards an abyss.

“Lyric poet” for Tsvetaeva is a term of precise significance, explored in an essay, “Poets without History and Poets with History.”  A “lyric poet” is the former–and it is also the sort of poet Tsvetaeva knows herself to be. Though she does not place herself in the discussion, she lists her great contemporaries, and friends, Pasternak, Akhmatova, and Mandelstam as “lyric poets”–admitting Blok as an additional example, with qualifications. She circles down on her subject as she writes, and recurring in her descriptions of a lyric poet is the delineation of the lyric poet as not only being in the world, but as coming to the world, as if each lyric poem was a reassertion of being in the world, rather than a moving continually outward in a world in which the poet has long existed (the latter would be the Poet with History):

Mine or others’, the vital or the superfluous, the accidental and the eternal: everything for them is a touchstone. Of their power, which increases with each new obstacle. Their self-discovery is their coming to self-knowledge through the world, self-knowledge of the soul through the visible world. Their path is the path of experience. As they walk, we physically sense a wind, the air they cleave with their brows. A wind blows from them.

When you approach the sea–and the lyric poet–you are not going for something new, but for the same again; for a repetition, not a continuation. Lyric poetry, like the sea, even when you’re discovering it for the first time, is something you invariable re-read; while with a river, which flows past, as with Pushkin who walks past–if it’s on their banks you’ve been born–you always read on. It is the difference between the crossways, lulling, lyrical motion of the sea, and the linear, never-returning movement of a river. The difference between being somewhere and passing by. 

And if some poets seem dull because of their monotony, then this comes from the shallowness and smallness (the drying up) of the image, not from the fact that the image remains the same. 

Lyricism, for all that it is doomed to itself, is itself inexhaustible (Perhaps the best formula for the lyrical and the lyric is this: being doomed to inexhaustibility!) The more you draw out, the more there remains. This is why it never disappears.

Pure lyricists, only-lyricsts, don’t allow anything alien into themselves, and they have an instinct for this just as poets with history have an instinct for their own general line. The whole empirical world is for them [lyric poets] a foreign body. In this sense, they have the power to choose, or more exactly, the power to select, or more exactly, the power to reject.

Tsvetaeva is an extreme example of a lyric poem. Her lyric poetry is inexhaustible because her self must always, from the extreme of feeling, gather into itself in the lyric poem; reading her poetry is like “being somewhere” not only because it is varied in its sameness, but because the sense of “being somewhere,” is an end to which the poetry aspires. She not only has the power to choose and the power to reject the “foreign body” that is the world–but her poetry is a demonstration, a reminder and an enactment, of the power to choose and reject, since that power of choice and rejection is what remains to her, and must be exercised, at her remove—from the past, from the addressees of her poems, from her homes, from even her self.

Here the epilogue to Poem of the Mountain (1924):

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There are blanks in memory         cataracts

on our eyes; the seven veils.

I no longer remember you separately

as a face but a white emptiness

.

without true features. All– is a

whiteness. (My spirit is one

uninterrupted wound.) The chalk of

details must         belong to tailors!

.

The dome of heaven was         built in a single frame

and oceans         are featureless        a mass of

drops that cannot be distinguished.  You

are unique. And love is no detective.

.

Let now some neighbor say whether your

hair is black or fair, for he can tell.

I leave that to physicians or watchmakers.

What passion has a use for such details?

.

You are a full, unbroken circle, a

whirlwind or          wholly turned to stone.

I cannot think of you apart from

love. There is an      equal sign.

.

(In heaps of sleepy down, and falls of

water, hills of foam, there is

a new sound, strange to my hearing,

instead if I          a regal we)

.

and though life’s beggared now and

narrowed into           how things are

still I cannot see you joined to

anyone: a

revenge of memory.

.

Tsvetaeva in a letter to Pasternak, May 1926:

But there’s one thing, Boris: I don’t like these. Can’t bear it. A vast expanse and nothing to walk on–that’s one thing. In constant motion and I can only watch it–that’s another. Why, Boris, it’s the same thing all over again, i.e., it’s my notorious involuntary immobility….It cannot be caressed (too wet). It cannot be worshiped (too terrible). As I would have hated Jehovah, for instance, as I hate any great power. The sea is a dictatorship, Boris. A mountain is a divinity. A mountain as many sides to it. A mountain stoops to the level of Mur (touched by him!) and rises to Goethe’s brow; then, not to embarrass him, rises even higher. A mountain has streams, nests, games. A mountain is first and foremost what I stand on, Boris. My exact worth. A mountain is a great dash on the printed page, Boris, to be filled in with a deep sigh.

To end, the seventh part of the Poem of the Mountain:

.

The mountain mourned for what is now blood

and heat will turn only to sadness.

The mountain mourned. It will not let us go.

It will not let you lie with someone else!

.

The mountain mourned, for what is now

world and Rome will turn         only to smoke.

The mountain mourned, because we shall be with

others. (And I do not envy them!)

.

The mountain mourned: for the terrible load

of promises, too late for us to renounce.

The mountain mourned the ancient nature of

the Gordian knot of law and passion.

.

The mountain mourned for our mourning also.

For tomorrow! Not yet! Above our foreheads

will break–death’s sea of–memories!

For tomorrow, when we shall realize!

.

That sound           what?        as if someone were

crying just nearby? Can that be it?

The mountain is mourning. Because we must go down

separately, over such mud,

.

into life which we all know is nothing but

mob market barracks:

That sound said: all poems of

mountains           are written        thus

.

The poem is written to recover the mountain; to allow the poet to be overtaken by its force of gravity and pull of place; it is the lost place, the original point of return that exile forbids, comforting because it mourns for her no less than she for it. And it almost made to return to hand: “That sound….crying just nearby? Can that be it?”

Sighing for the mountain, in the spaces and dashes of the page, in the rewritten language of her poetry, she finds her self to stand upon.

 

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